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Post by no mom its ironic on Wed Nov 21, 2012 11:31 pm

Okay, so Fuse, Max and I will be collaborating to make a story. It goes like this:

There are 4 universes, mine, Fuse's, Max's, and one where most of our OC's are evil instead of good.

Just a note about my universe (I only posted this because I was impatient, so the next chapter may take a while): The Serpentine and the Rajis are two species forced underground by the magician humans of their world. They fought for many years. Caiura and Samara are the dual sister rulers of the kingdom underground, Samara being much, much older than Caiura. Caiura is more Rajis than Serpentine, vice versa for Samara. Caiura was the victim of an experiment which involved the ice. It backfired and Caiura was stuck in Ichidor, an ancient alternate universe for a thousand years in Samara's time, and just about a week for Caiura. So she's very out of sync.

Chapter 1: Crumbling Stone

The cracks run up the stone in such a manner they could easily be mistaken for cobwebs. As the two rulers, both sisters, sit down on the balcony, a minor decorative piece crumbles. “This place is ruined. Is it older than you?” One of them jokes, but the other’s face is pale and serious.

“Caiura... This is the palace.”

“What do you mean this is the palace? I mean, we just walked...”

“This is the palace we just left. Something is... wrong. Can’t you smell it?” With a clinking of what seems like a million pieces of smooth stone against each other, a serpent-like dragon is crouched on the balcony in an uncomfortable position, forked tongue sliding out with a barely audible hiss.

“I can’t smell it, Samara! Stop...” Caiura gestures wildly. “Expecting... things you can do from me!”

“...Can’t you feel it?”

Something does feel wrong. The air is filled with the wet, musty dust of a million years of mold. There are echoes of spiders scuttling around; dying, too. The pulse of simple, unstoppable time disconcerts both of them. Samara’s claws click against a million pieces of stone. She can hear stone cracking quickly and suddenly jerks upward, grabbing wildly for her younger sister as she slams her head against the wall.

The balcony and the wall Samara slammed into both fall into pieces, which shatter into miniscule dust. The fine dust coats Caiura’s arm and she stares at it for a moment before blowing it all off. “That... is not the palace’s stone.” Her voice states simply that there is no arguing. That stone is foreign.

Samara hisses in pain for a moment but nods in agreement. “I have no idea what this is, then. I was taking us back to the palace...”

“I could’ve gone alone!” Caiura exclaims, bursting out of her sister’s grip and relying on her own wings to slowly glide down. She yells up to her older sister. “Come on, I’m the ruler of the Rajis and Serpentine just like you!”

“Yes, well one thousand years--and that’s rounding down to the nearest thousand, mind you--is a long time to be missing. The whole place has changed by then. A lot of the newborns have insisted you never existed.” Samara laughs and follows down, gliding, after Caiura. “They’re getting foolish as time passes.”

Caiura pauses and leans on a chunk of stone. Her voice is small. “I didn’t think it was... that long.”

“The ice is old. The glacier over there, for example--” Samara points with, basically, her whole body. “--has cleared out the cavern twice again.”

“Wow.” Caiura thought that the Serpentine seemed in charge of the whole operation, and this fact makes her swell with pride a little bit. “Wow.”

Suddenly, Samara turns, a graceful motion with the slightest whipping of her tail. “...Look.”

The palace--a perfect copy, other than the stone, it appears--crumbles into nothingness.

Caiura doesn’t breath for a moment. “Do you think that happened after the whole business with Ichidor and the ice?”

“No, that couldn’t have just suddenly happened--”

“But how else would it get there?”

Samara sighs, a look-I’m-your-older-sister sort of sigh. “True, that’s the most likely thing. Actually, wait, with Ichidor--” Her eyes spark with an idea. “Got it!” She falls to the ground and, with a whirling of dust and rock, stands up as a young woman.

Caiura grins. “Okay, let’s go home first. I want to see Mom.” Samara frowns.

“I thought...”

“It’s okay, it was bound to happen. She told us when I first came home. Let’s go visit the ceme.. cemetery.” Caiura is speaking seriously, no smile.

Warmth. It spreads through her ice-cold body and she welcomes it. The hug of her sister envelops her and she stands up straight. Samara’s arms fall limply to her side.

“Okay,” she whispers. “I’ll show you where the cemetery is.” She casts a glance to where the fake palace stood. “It’s... over there...”

“That palace. It’s from the ice. It has to be. That’s why it felt foreign, Ichidor was so... foreign.”

“But why... in the direction of the cemetery?...”

“The ice killed. That’s what it wanted. Death to the Serpentine.” She laughs weakly. “It seemed like a good idea at the time.”

“You can visit the cemetery by yourself... you’ll be okay, right? I’ll investigate the fake palace.” Samara kisses her sister’s forehead and walks with her for a minute or two before she stops at the remaining pile of debris and salutes stiffly. “We’ll rendezvous here, Your Royal Highness, Queen Palendai.”

Caiura giggles girlishly and curtsies. “Of course, Your Royal Highness, Queen Okrin.” She can almost skip over to the cemetery, except it reeks with an aura like the palace. Looking back, she sees her sister crouching down and holding a shard of stone, looking it over suspiciously. It’s not from here, not from Ichidor, she realizes. It’s not here because of the ice. The next thought comes from behind. Where did it come from?


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Re: A Currently Unnamed Collaboration Story

Post by you're not my supervisor on Fri Nov 23, 2012 2:49 pm

So can I do the next chapter?

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Post by no mom its ironic on Fri Nov 23, 2012 3:33 pm

Sure. There are just different universes. I will talk with fuse and stuff but I also need to talk with you at the same time so go on the chatbox.

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Post by you're not my supervisor on Fri Nov 23, 2012 5:12 pm

Okay.

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Post by no mom its ironic on Fri Nov 23, 2012 7:10 pm

CHAAAaaatbox.

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Chapter 2

Post by you're not my supervisor on Sun Dec 09, 2012 11:48 pm

Chapter 2: Hello to Goodbye

(About the chapter title, I had 'Hello' by Evanescence stuck in my head. Don't judge me.)

The three of them sat in the boat together, laughing, just the way they usually did. The green in Venia's hair seemed to glow, the yellow in Aylec's brown hair was like the sun, and even the dark blue in Galatea's dirty blonde waves seemed to glow. Venia smiled mischievously and squirted Aylec in the face. He scooped up a handful of water from the lake and managed to splash both girls. Galatea splashed him back. Soon the three of them were in a full-on water fight. The, things took a turn for the worst. None of them were exactly sure how it happened, but one moment Galatea was ducking one of Venia's water streams, and the next she was falling backwards into the lake, hitting her head on a rock and disappearing under the water.

"Galatea!" Venia screamed, jumping into the water after her friend.

"Venia, no!" Aylec yelled, grabbing her shirt and pulling her back above the water.

Venia was almost in tears. "You have to let me find her!"

She pulled out of his grasp and dove under the lake's surface. She swam frantically, but didn't see anything or anyone. Galatea Summit was gone.


Venia's eye's shot open and she sat up in bed quickly, scaring away the monkey that had been curled up on her chest. It was nearly a month since that day, and she was still having nightmares about it. Trouble climbed back on the bed and started petting Venia's hair, chattering softly in her ear to try and calm her down.

"I'm okay, T," Venia said, pulling the monkey off her shoulder and hugging him close, "It was the dream again. You think I'll ever stop having that nightmare?"

Trouble shrugged and climbed around the end of the bed and up to the window. Venia slid out of bed and put on her boots and jacket. She climbed up the bookshelf along the wall and opened the window.

"C'mon, T. We're going for a walk."

She opened the window and climbed out, followed by the monkey. She moved along the trail winding around the Their house toward the woods. Something big was moving through the trees toward her, sparks emanating from it.

"No," she breathed, stopping to look closer at the huge shape approaching her, "It can't be. I thought they were extinct..."

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Post by no mom its ironic on Wed Sep 25, 2013 12:31 am

this was actually a pretty good idea guys

guys this was actually a pretty good idea

guys

this was a pretty good idea


guys

guuuys

guysysysss >:

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Post by you're not my supervisor on Wed Sep 25, 2013 3:24 pm

It's not my fault it died! It was supposed to be Fuse's turn to write!

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Post by no mom its ironic on Wed Sep 25, 2013 7:42 pm

#getrekt wrote:this was actually a pretty good idea fuseguys

fuse this was actually a pretty good idea

fuse

this was a pretty good idea


fuse

fuuuse

fusesesesesss >:
revised <:

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Post by Andrew on Wed Sep 25, 2013 7:45 pm


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Post by you're not my supervisor on Wed Sep 25, 2013 9:09 pm

#getrekt wrote:
#getrekt wrote:this was actually a pretty good idea fuseguys

fuse this was actually a pretty good idea

fuse

this was a pretty good idea


fuse

fuuuse

fusesesesesss >:
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Post by no mom its ironic on Wed Sep 25, 2013 10:20 pm

#NTF

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Post by no mom its ironic on Wed Sep 25, 2013 11:14 pm

i am going to botehr you 4ever now bro

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Post by you're not my supervisor on Thu Sep 26, 2013 12:05 pm

Bother bother bother.

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Post by no mom its ironic on Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:15 pm

max let us steam-bother him together

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Post by no mom its ironic on Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:18 pm

dangit fuse you aren't on steaaam

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Post by Andrew on Thu Sep 26, 2013 7:45 pm

I'M DROWNING IN BOOKS ABOUT NETWORKING

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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Post by no mom its ironic on Thu Sep 26, 2013 10:50 pm

i swear fdlfhdljfdhljh

but seriously i would like to continue this >:

basically fuse

i don't CARE

have a lifesaver ring made out of the STUFF I DO NOT GIVE

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Post by you're not my supervisor on Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:23 pm

Basically, this means DO IT OR WE'LL HAUNT YOU FOREVER.

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Post by Andrew on Fri Sep 27, 2013 9:16 am

(Actually, you can continue it on your ownnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn)

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Post by no mom its ironic on Fri Sep 27, 2013 11:42 pm

but but

but but

FUSE ACTUALLY BE PRODUCTIVE DANGIT

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Post by you're not my supervisor on Sat Sep 28, 2013 12:20 am

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSE





Elder, get the duct tape, jumper cables, and car batteries. We ride at dawn!

(Actually, better wait until Sunday, since I have to be a bridesmaid tomorrow.)

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Post by no mom its ironic on Sat Sep 28, 2013 12:24 am

Okay. Sunday. I can do that.

(I'll be busy with orchestra anyway.)

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Post by you're not my supervisor on Sat Sep 28, 2013 12:25 am

(Yay for things working out!)

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Post by no mom its ironic on Sat Oct 05, 2013 1:07 pm

fuse is useless, let's just continue this ourselves

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