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Should I make another story

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Re: Gather Round Children

Post by you're not my supervisor on Tue Dec 18, 2012 8:29 pm

What did I just READ?

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Post by Scorp on Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:14 pm

I say Derp.
I would love to read other stories by you, but there are two things you would benifit to pay attention to:
1. Press ENTER when you separate the character's dialogue
and
2. Try to use correct grammar
Other than that, I would have cast yes.

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