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Post by AshtonFearBolt on Fri Jul 26, 2013 6:24 pm

The plot: We begin in a warm cottage, In the forest, On the borderline of Xia, Wintertime

A young boy steps outside of the cottage, While the entire world lay sleeping, He be outside with a shovel to bury his once-living dog, Josh. The boy, Tear in eye begins to dig and dig a decent plot for the pet, But does not want the dog to go still , the dog was the divisor in a terrible live of his parents abusing,

The dog was the only love he had in his life. "No Josh I dont want you to go!" he cried, Yet he look up at the sky and see a light brightening the once dull sky and land, Suddenly the boy's dog moves , It wiggles until it is back up on its feet. "Josh.....is it you?" he whispered quietly to avoid waking his family, The dog whimpered and cuddled up to him, Somehow he knew this night would not be as lonely as he expected.

But around dawn he wakes hearing barking, quickly rushing outside to the dog barking at his tree, "Hush boy they will hear you" he whispered, yet with the dog still barking he was afraid his parents might hear. Suddenly the ground starts to shake, this was no squirrel or wild creature this was much more and the boy and dog were knocked down a hill and the boy became unconscious


This is Part 1, Please comment if you think I should continue this story.

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Re: New Star

Post by AshtonFearBolt on Fri Jul 26, 2013 6:30 pm

May add some ambiance if you listen to this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UnlyAjCVC9U

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Post by AshtonFearBolt on Tue Jul 30, 2013 12:50 am

Bump (Is this allowed)

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Post by no mom its ironic on Tue Jul 30, 2013 1:04 am

eeeeerrr well bumps aren't usually needed in the stories section

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Re: New Star

Post by AshtonFearBolt on Tue Jul 30, 2013 1:04 am

Chell I say!

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Re: New Star

Post by Gunther Magnuson on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:02 pm

Uh..Too short and if the dog was the only "love he had in his life....I just...Never mind...

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